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I never thought about how unhygenic eating food from below bins was, back when I played Streets Of Rage. Awesome.
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... but the one thing I have to criticise is your sound. The rain is way too loud, and the music way too quiet in comparison.
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Maybe you could have more than one test in the flash? There are plenty of reaction times testers out there, try and combine several tests into the flash.
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When you're not using voice acting, it helps if you ensure that your text is spelled correctly. Also, the animation seemed to go a bit slow, particularly the bungee fall. Sounds were poor also.
The twist of the guy focusing more on his wallet than his life was a bit unsuspected, but with better graphics, better fluidity and slightly better gags - you could be onto something with an extreme stickmen series.
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...it does make you think, and I like that. However the levels don't seem to get progressively harder ( infact I skipped to the last level and found it easier than the first ). Try adding more blocks to push, maybe different coloured blocks / requirements etc to make the higher levels more of a challenge :-)
Good start though. Protected.
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You're just about gonna get protected by me, as this is a good concept. Some suggestions:
Improve animation, and maybe have some better voicing. Cut down the incredibly long intro and present more of these useless lines - possibly have a section of the movie where you see them being used in rapid succession, maybe some more female reaction tot hem... and you're onto a winner!
Author's Response:
Thanks dude for the advice. We hope that this will become a running series and turn into something really good...
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A good short, well done :-)
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But... it was too hard to steer the ship out of the way of oncoming icebergs, due to its size on the screen - you needed to be really quick with your fingers or just trust to luck.
My max score was 16 :-(
Author's Response:
You didnt think it was gonna be childsplay now did you :P
Anyways i agree, the ship might be just a tit too big, but after all it IS the titanic.
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... but it is a good first attempt, and a good idea. You simply need to work more on the flash - making it longer, bringing in better sound, and if possible voicing, to help improve it.
Author's Response:
I hate you. No i joked, but it wasnt so bad?
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Your graphics and animation are good, if albeit slow at some points - but what is the purpose of the flash? As a "coming soon" one it shows little other than a man walking / hiking / climbing across snow... doesn't really generate interest.
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